A letter to your friend traveling overseas. You're staying at their apartment and there was a storm.
Tell your friend about the storm.
Tell them what got damaged.
Detail what repairs need to be do.
Dear Sarah and John,
I want write you about a storm. it's start about 1 hour ago and countinion at the moment. this weather will be stay all day today and tomorrow morning. We have a strong wing, big waves and crazy thunderstorm. I closed a windows, doors and garage.some staff in your home is flying and I'm fixing it now.
But now i should say you about what damaged at apartment. you have a problem with kitchen window near a refregirator. this window is broken and I make a clean this area. one more problem with balcony door.
And I took some things from outdoor and brought their inside.
The first thing to say what after storm you really need with repairs a home staff. For example, window in kitchen need a change, because this glass is broken and you can throw out it. today i will go to shop and will try buy some staff for window and when you come back you change it for another one glass. And keys from door was a broken, because they was inside a door and wind closed it there and now i can't close a door on a balcony.
Guys I will fix all of them, but you need a back early, because you have a big problem in apartment.
Best regards, Alex
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
Dear Sarah and John, I want write you about a storm. its star...
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Suggestion: Its
... I want write you about a storm. its start about 1 hour ago and countinion a...
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Suggestion: This
... hour ago and countinion at the moment. this weather will be stay all day today and ...
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Line 4, column 190, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng. We have a strong wing, big waves and crazy thunderstorm. I closed a windows, ...
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Line 4, column 221, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a window' or simply 'windows'?
Suggestion: a window; windows
...waves and crazy thunderstorm. I closed a windows, doors and garage.some staff in your ho...
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Line 4, column 287, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...e.some staff in your home is flying and Im fixing it now. but now i should say...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... home is flying and Im fixing it now. but now i should say you about what dama...
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Line 5, column 3, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: But
...ome is flying and Im fixing it now. but now i should say you about what damaged...
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Line 5, column 11, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...lying and Im fixing it now. but now i should say you about what damaged at ap...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: You
...ay you about what damaged at apartment. you have a problem with kitchen window near...
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Suggestion: This
...ith kitchen window near a refregirator. this window is broken and I makea clean thi...
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Line 5, column 146, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
... refregirator. this window is broken and I makea clean this area. one more promle...
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Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: One
...is broken and I makea clean this area. one more promlem with balcony door. And I...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from outdoor and brought their inside. The first thing to say what after srorm ...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... broken and you can throw out it. today i will go to shop and will try buy some s...
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Line 7, column 407, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...a door and wind closed it there and now i cant close a door on a balcony. Guys ...
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Line 7, column 409, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...door and wind closed it there and now i cant close a door on a balcony. Guys I wil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, really, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 5.05154639175 337% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25675675676 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13806485433 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585585585586 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5116502419 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.0625 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.875 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.1875 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 2.54639175258 668% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163789184699 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519755711508 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048015431749 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725114586844 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452733816547 0.0580467560999 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.84 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.2 7.59969072165 82% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.