A letter to your friend traveling overseas. You're staying at their apartment and there was a storm.
Tell your friend about the storm.
Tell them what got damaged.
Detail what repairs need to be do.
I want write you about a storm. it's start about 1 hour ago and countinion at the moment. this weather will be stay all day today and tomorrow morning. We have a strong wing, big waves and crazy thunderstorm. I closed a windows, doors and garage.some staff in your home is flying and I'm fixing it now.
But now i should say you about what damaged at apartment. you have a problem with kitchen window near a refregirator. this window is broken and I makea clean this area. one more promlem with balcony door.
I makea clean this area. one more promlem with balcony door.
And I took some things from outdoor and brought their inside.
The first thing to say what after srorm you really need with repairs a home staff. For example, window in kitchen need a change, because this glass is broken and you can throw out it. today i will go to shop and will try buy some staff for window and when you come back you change it for another one glass.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Its
I want write you about a storm. its start about 1 hour ago and countinion a...
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Suggestion: This
... hour ago and countinion at the moment. this weather will be stay all day today and ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng. We have a strong wing, big waves and crazy thunderstorm. I closed a windows, ...
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Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a window' or simply 'windows'?
Suggestion: a window; windows
...waves and crazy thunderstorm. I closed a windows, doors and garage.some staff in your ho...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...e.some staff in your home is flying and Im fixing it now. But now i should say...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... home is flying and Im fixing it now. But now i should say you about what dama...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...lying and Im fixing it now. But now i should say you about what damaged at ap...
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Suggestion: You
...ay you about what damaged at apartment. you have a problem with kitchen window near...
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Suggestion: This
...ith kitchen window near a refregirator. this window is broken and I makea clean thi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... refregirator. this window is broken and I makea clean this area. one more promle...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: One
...is broken and I makea clean this area. one more promlem with balcony door. ...
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Suggestion: One
... door. I makea clean this area. one more promlem with balcony door. And I...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from outdoor and brought their inside. The first thing to say what after srorm ...
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Line 8, column 193, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... broken and you can throw out it. today i will go to shop and will try buy some s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, really, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36723163842 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14753187035 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604519774011 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3587219383 44.8134815571 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.5333333333 76.5299724578 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14746148943 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506254982485 0.0766984524023 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562888033777 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0691172739938 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488377612299 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.06 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.