The line chart illustrates population trends globally by percentage from 1950 to 2040 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The line chart illustrates population trends globally by percentage from 1950 to 2040.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given charts provides information on global trend of population in terms of geographic areas and age groups between 1950 and 2040.

A glance at the chart reveals that it is evident that urban populations have and will continue to constitute the majority of growth. In terms of age groups, those 15-65 have become by far the largest group and this is predicted to remain the same in the future.

As presented in the first chart, in 1950, the population of rural and urban area are nearly the same, at around 5%. Until the present day, while the proportion of people in rural ares hovered around 5%, that in urban areas rose significantly by 5% each decade and reaches 25% in 2020. This trend is anticipated to continue and urban occupants should represent just under 40% by 2040, whereas rural population will remain stable around 5%. The growth in total figures roughly mirror urban percentages but are 5-10% higher throughout.

The age distribution indicates clearly that those 15-65 (beginning at 6% in 1950) will become most common, rising close to 5% each decade with a likely high point of 35% by the end of the period surveyed. Those under 15 and over 65 display a broadly similar pattern at around 5% for the majority of the time described.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 32.9175257732 30% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1041.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7752293578 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46993963513 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582568807339 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 30.822470559 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132016595099 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640482563422 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775837383213 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102022762126 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932794932415 0.0580467560999 161% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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