Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession. Is this a positive or negative development?
It is reported that famous people tend to give their opinions on some events that are not related to their occupations. Although they have the right to express their opinions freely as a citizen, it is my deep conviction that this would have some negative impacts on the society.
A factor that prevents celebrities from the freedom to express their opinions is their popularity, which allows them to affect the public's views. If a film star or a singer gives his comments on a topic which provokes controversial arguments, his fans and supporters are influenced more or less by his point of view. Hence, these people's opinions are not neutral anymore and this cannot ensure the fairness of the debate. Therefore, famous figures should not share their views publicly to avoid biased views.
Additionally, there are some matters or issues that are not appropriate to give comments on freely, mostly related to politics. If the celebrities share their views on these topics, intentionally or not, this may set an obstacle to their career path. For instance, at Miss Universe 2020, Myanmar representative held a banner with "Pray for Myanmar" on it, then she was accused of rioting and got into trouble in her country. It is obvious that some people, including the celebrities, are not aware of the sensitive topics of their own country, so famous figures, whose activities are tracked and reported on a frequent basis, should consider their behaviours so as not to get into trouble. Therefore, it is not a good idea to encourage celebrities to raise their voices about the topics that have little relevance to their occupations.
In conclusion, I cannot deny the rights to free speech of the celebrities, but I do not encourage them to mention the issues that have little to do with them on large platforms. They should consider thoroughly before sharing there views because their opinions affects not only the public but also themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03703703704 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75882422621 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546296296296 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1484296614 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.538461538 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389111918354 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132740680883 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757904159665 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226742619399 0.151304729494 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163235339084 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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