Dear Sir or Madam,
This is Azhar and I work as a T&D Manager in a multinational company whose head office is in the same vicinity as of the Kent college. It is also important to mention that I am a recent alumnus of your institute. During my course of study, I have observed that the majority of the faculty and the students were unaware of the culture of my country of origin, India. So, I wish to address the attendees and share the information.
Following the preliminary agenda, I would start with the historic background of the country and how it got influenced by different outside invaders at different times. In addition to that, I would also spend some time on the local language and how it came into existence. The third point of the talk is going to be about the local traditions and the diversity of cultures and its’ impact on local cuisine.
In my opinion, the above-mentioned agenda points will be liked by the audience as most of the pupils are studying history and geography at college. This talk will give them a new perspective about my country as they will hear such things for the very first time from a native, unlike the information they might have got earlier from media and news.
I wonder if you could provide a projector so that I could present some slides which contain pictures of the local events and customs. If not, please let know at your earliest convenience so that I could arrange it by myself.
Thank you for allowing me to participate in this event.
Yours sincerely,
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Dear Sir or Madam, This is Azhar and I work as a T&D Manage...
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...owing me to participate in this event. Yours sincerely,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, third, in addition, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 271.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65313653137 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63026907035 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586715867159 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 290.88556701 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.658503962 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.083333333 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189625791339 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054655763876 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0400916139438 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881316893745 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271067377413 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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