A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures.
Write a letter to the college head. In your letter:
Tell him/her about the topic that you are going to talk about
Explain why would they be of interest to the students
Ask about any arrangements that you need to give the talk.
Dear sir,
I am writing this letter to take permission for giving speech on international day which will be celebrated by your institution in the month of December. As I know that number of students who enrolled are coming from different nations. That is why I would like to talk about my country and the topic is unity in diversity. By listening speech on this topic everyone can not only get an idea regarding Indian culture, but also learn about various languages as well as religions.
Along with this, I decided to show few videos in between my talk related to topic which will attract the student and session will become more interesting. If students listen this speech, it will assist them to learn fundamental values of life, eventually it will be beneficial for their day-to-day life.
Although I got most of the particulars from your website regarding this event, please let me know, if I need to accomplished any registration formalities to be participate in it, I will do it as per norms.
I hope for the positive response from you!
Yours faithfully,
X.Y.Z.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r institution in the month of December. As I know that number of students who enro...
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Line 17, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... do it as per norms. I hope for the positive response from you! Yours f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 914.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94054054054 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78949296481 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.681081081081 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.4225097783 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.125 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21610094469 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100567079748 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620271647764 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114908645579 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0830083493016 0.0580467560999 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 8.37731958763 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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