A local college is having an international day. You want to speak about your country to students from different cultures.
Write a letter to the college head. In your letter:
• Tell him/her about the topics that you are going to talk about
• Explain why would they be of interest to the students
• Ask about any arrangements that you need to make to give the talk
Dear Sir or Madam
I am a third-year student of the International relationships department and I am writing in connection with a presentation I intend to give on the country I come from, namely, Russia.
Russia has undergone a tremendous number of changes. Nowadays it is the biggest country in the world with a rich history and a great cultural heritage. In my presentation I am going to tell students about the impact my country made in the development of technologies, which are being ubiquitously used today. Also, I would like to narrate about the problems Russian engineers were faced with while inventing, and the ways they were tackled. I believe, many students will be interested in this topic and will learn a number of contraptions which originated in Russia.
if everything aforementioned interests you, contact me as soon as possible. I would appreciate it if you could provide me with a lecture-room to rehearse my speech.
I look forward to receiving your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Eugene.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 568, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ontraptions which originated in Russia. if everything aforementioned interests y...
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Line 19, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...s which originated in Russia. if everything aforementioned interests you...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30538922156 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18768786722 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652694610778 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7372310414 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166835770428 0.216113520407 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578610166056 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351514862373 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0802705380989 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0210679884682 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.