A magazine wants to include contributions from its readers for an article called 'The book that influenced me most'.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influenced you most. In your letter
• describe what this book was about explain how this book influenced you
• say whether this book would be likely to influence other people
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to share one of my life-changing books as a contribution to your ‘The book that influences me the most’ magazine article. This book is named ‘Rich dad poor dad’ by Robert Kiyosaki, a famous and successful American entrepreneur. The book narrates about Robert’s childhood living with two of his dad, in which Robert’s dad is the typical poor dad and his friend’s dad is the rich one. These two dads have two different perspectives on money as well as opposite ways of teaching their sons financial lessons.
Throughout the book, Robert delivers vital financial practices by using his rich dads’ approach and attitude toward money. The two opposite points of view contrasting in the mindset of the rich and poor indirectly teach me how to be more financially wise and make better money-related decisions.
Rich dad poor dad has proved its value to readers as being in the world best sellers category for an extended period. In my opinion, this book will continue to influence more and more people as financial lessons are always necessary for everyone, especially those in developing countries. These countries have not prioritized personal financial management as a subject students need to learn in secondary school. As a consequence, many have fallen into the trap of working for money and never achieving their life target.
Thank you for your precious time.
Kind regards,
Henry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sellers'' or 'seller's'?
Suggestion: sellers'; seller's
...e to readers as being in the world best sellers category for an extended period. In my ...
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Line 7, column 370, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'student'?
Suggestion: student
...sonal financial management as a subject students need to learn in secondary school. As a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, well, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1215.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17021276596 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80797544868 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655319148936 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7579464429 44.8134815571 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.25 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197266484624 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732302804507 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897169624222 0.0603063233224 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11425449569 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513072495076 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 8.37731958763 152% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.