You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that ton centres in your country all look very similar to each other. You don't fully agree with this opinion.
Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter
• say which points in the article you agree with
• explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres
offer to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to discuss with you some ideas relating to your recent article about the similarity between the main towns in my country. Firstly, I support the thinking that towns in my area have quite an identical look from the outside. The design was traced back to an empire around 500 years ago in our history, called “An Nam”. Our ancestors lived and grew their own cultures and beliefs. They then represented those customs back into their artistic subjects, such as architectural buildings and important religious sites.
However, although it is pretty the same appearance to normal eyes, the art of sculpting illustrated in different city towns tells a distinct story. By the time these towns were built, our nation had not been able to form a completed writing alphabet for the language, but dependent on Chinese in casual literature, illustration rose as a means of storytelling that was easy to recognize by a variety of people. For instance, our center town has sculptures that represent the story of how agriculture was formed back in the bygone day.
Since this style of architecture is attached with a long history, it is not an easy way to actually pursue the knowledge needed to comprehend the beauty of our culture. I hereby recommend one of the most credited tour guide company in my city is Saigon tourist. They have a wide range of tours available throughout the year, which also includes a tour guide that can show you more about our feudal empire in the past, which formed most of the building architecture nowadays.
Thanks for your precious time.
Kind regards,
Henry
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, then, as for, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 937.175257732 145% => OK
No of words: 275.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93818181818 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62081685582 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 127.690721649 142% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658181818182 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 290.88556701 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.8815505147 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.461538462 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1538461538 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127652312264 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0394782177072 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462201711513 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761914926186 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379969046087 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 41.2886597938 191% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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