In many countries imprisonment is said to be the most common solution to crimes but I agree that education will be a more effective solution.
Imprisonment helps put culprits behind bars and making them not interact with the society however, this gives the citizens a sense of safety in their absence. On the other hand I agree with the fact that education plays a better role by educating individuals and make them not commit a crime in the first place. The human mind is a vacuum and eager to learn new things. Teaching the citizens the right information will not only solve issues of crime but make our world a better place.
I believe that sending people to prison will not really impact the right results needed so I’d suggest that other countries should adopt the solution of passing the right information which will drastically reduce crime and also build a nation where the future generations will thrive and exist in a crime free world
This is the extent to which I agree.
Yours faithfully
Adam Grant
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
In many countries imprisonment is said to be the most com...
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Line 4, column 180, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...y in their absence. On the other hand I agree with the fact that education plays a better role by educat...
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Line 7, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l thrive and exist in a crime free world This is the extent to which I agree. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to which I agree. Yours faithfully Adam Grant
^^^^^
Line 15, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Yours faithfully Adam Grant
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, really, so, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90960451977 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4318080087 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598870056497 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.6765485031 44.8134815571 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.142857143 76.5299724578 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 16.8248392259 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 4.34317383033 250% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347676042615 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14075702869 0.0766984524023 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18335642783 0.0603063233224 304% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226110941231 0.12726935374 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198455892328 0.0580467560999 342% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 9, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
In many countries imprisonment is said to be the most com...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 180, Rule ID: AGREE_WITH_THE_FACT[1]
Message: Use simply 'agree that'.
Suggestion: agree that
...y in their absence. On the other hand I agree with the fact that education plays a better role by educat...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 316, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l thrive and exist in a crime free world This is the extent to which I agree. ...
^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to which I agree. Yours faithfully Adam Grant
^^^^^
Line 15, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e. Yours faithfully Adam Grant
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, really, so, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90960451977 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4318080087 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598870056497 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 98.6765485031 44.8134815571 220% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.142857143 76.5299724578 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 16.8248392259 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8571428571 4.34317383033 250% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.347676042615 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14075702869 0.0766984524023 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.18335642783 0.0603063233224 304% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.226110941231 0.12726935374 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.198455892328 0.0580467560999 342% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 8.71597938144 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.