Throughout history, some individuals desire to build a society that is perfect while they have not come to a conclusion how the ideal society will turn out to be. However, in my opinion, transparency is expedient when we think of making a society that is perfect, and having trustworthy leaders, generally, will ensure that we achieve a society that is ideal.
On the one hand, the first thing that comes to mind is transparency when we think of creating a perfect society. In other words, a region will not stand if their dealings are not transparent, and it will bring a lot of confusion and mistrust. Take Nigeria, for instance, the major problem the country faces today is because the people in charge are not being sincere, and this will do more harm than good. Thus, an ideal society is achievable as long as everyone is carried along, and not been left in the dark.
On the other hand, if we have trustworthy leaders in our country, then the ideal society we want can be achieved. For example, Dubai grew to be the most visited country by tourists because they had leaders with integrity, and the results accomplished by these commanders can be seen in the country today. Similarly, the United States of America rose to be the world-power today because of the sincere leaders they have, so they run the world's economy. Therefore, having leaders that can be held accountable will endeavor that we have an ideal society.
To conclude, being transparent is very important given that we desire to create an ideal society, and having leaders we can trust will make having this society we dream about a possibility.
- You are going to throw a party and would like to cook a special dish for your guests but do not have the recipe Write a letter to your friend In your letter tell your friend why you are having a party explain what dish you want to cook and ask your friend 73
- The street where you live is very polluted Write to the local council and ask to act about this situation You should say What is the main problem How does it affect your street Give some suggestions and request action 61
- The number of TV programs is growing day by day Some people say it is good as it gives people more choices while others say it affects the quality of TV programs Discuss both the views and give your opinion 56
- Internet contains a lot of information however sometimes this information is inaccurate or wrong Do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Some people believe that entertainers are paid too much and their impact on the society is negative while others disagree and believe that they deserve the money they make because of their positive effect on others Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 437, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
...cere leaders they have, so they run the worlds economy. Therefore, having leaders that...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, similarly, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1347.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79359430605 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60546346409 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537366548043 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.6674878055 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.454545455 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312132355882 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129249723625 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105925750652 0.0667982634062 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21274985943 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113543593391 0.056905535591 200% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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