The maps illustrate some changes that were made to a city hospital s transport infrastructure between the years 2007 and 2010

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The maps illustrate some changes that were made to a city hospital's transport
infrastructure between the years 2007 and 2010.

The maps illustrate some changes that were made to a city hospital's transport
infrastructure between the years 2007 and 2010.
It is noticeable that three main modifications were made to the hospital’s vehicle
access. These involved the building of a new bus station, new roundabouts and new
parking facilities.
Looking at the changes in more detail, we can see that in 2007 there were three bus
stops on either side of Hospital Road. These were no longer present in 2010, and
instead we see the addition of a bus station on the west side of Hospital Road. This
bus station is accessed via two new roundabouts; the first roundabout is at the
intersection of City Road and Hospital Road, while the second is at the other end of
Hospital Road, at the junction with the hospital ring road.
The two maps also show that changes were made to public and staff parking areas.
In 2007, staff and visitors used the same car park, which was situated to the east of
Hospital Road and accessed via the ring road. However, by 2010 this original car
park had become a designated area for staff parking only. A new car park, located
on the east side of the ring road, provided parking for members of the public.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 32.9175257732 33% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1013.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73364485981 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49075940933 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504672897196 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.938490446 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.3 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.29896907216 349% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331796872891 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17963122299 0.0766984524023 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.280562890474 0.0603063233224 465% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142037284219 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186455851334 0.0580467560999 321% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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