The table give information about five types vehicles registered in Australia in 2010 2012 2014

Essay topics:

The table give information about five types vehicles registered in Australia in 2010,2012,2014.

The given table compared figures for five different froms of transport registered in Australia in the years 2010, 2012 and 2014.

overall, the numbers of vehicles in Australia registered rose over the four year period. Furthermore, passenger vehicles was the highest of five types of transport.

From 2010 to 2014, the numbers of passengers vehicles registered rose gradually from 11,800,000 to 13,000,000 registations, followed by commercial vehicles with figures growing from 2,300,000 to 2,700,00 registrations in Australia.Although motorcycles registered less than two vehicles above , just under 800,000 registrations, there was the greatest percentage of change at 30.8%, compared to 17.4 % for commercial and 10.2% for passenger vehicles between 2010 and 2014 in Australia.

For the remaining vehicles, heavy trucks were registered in Astralia higher than light trucks between the years 2010 and 2014. while there was an moderate increase in the number of registered heavy trucks by around 32,000 vehicles, the figures for light trucks was slightly lower, by about 25,000 vehicles. The respective percentages of changes of light and heavy trucks were at 23.5% and 8,3% over the period shown

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 32.9175257732 0% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.65745856354 4.54256449028 125% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98226515613 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552486187845 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 9.13402061856 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.964280882 44.8134815571 294% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.285714286 76.5299724578 191% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 16.8248392259 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303397786816 0.216113520407 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152606642442 0.0766984524023 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106230427168 0.0603063233224 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220335761614 0.12726935374 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0988689129992 0.0580467560999 170% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 8.37731958763 217% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 8.71597938144 182% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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