more and more people are suffring from helth problams caused by a modren life style which can not be treated with modren medicen some people think that return to traditional medicen should be encorage . do you agree or dis agree
All the money in the world can't buy you back helth. people are sufferinh from helth problem caused by a modren lifr style and they are not satisfy with modren medicien , and return to older days of treditional medicien. I completely go with treditional medicien because natural treatment is the best way to help out from new disease.
while in the time of modern treatment and using modern medicien , sudden change will occurs in human body, theough that makes you very weak . where as in the case of traditional medicien there will be no sideeffects like weakness,etc.
In some unique disease like cancer, fortunatly they are lot of medicen available in traditional way . the neutralize abstract from the nature which acts on your body , and ot reacts comfortable . you will not find any othe helth issues while using traditional medicine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
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Suggestion: People
...y in the world cant buy you back helth. people are sufferinh from helth problem caused...
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Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'satisfied'.
Suggestion: satisfied
...by a modren lifr style and they are not satisfy with modren medicien , and return to ol...
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Suggestion: ,
...hey are not satisfy with modren medicien , and return to older days of treditional...
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Suggestion: While
...best way to help out from new disease. while in the time of modern treatment and usi...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dern treatment and using modern medicien , sudden change will occurs in human bod...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd using modern medicien , sudden change will occurs in human body, theough that ...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'occur'
Suggestion: occur
...g modern medicien , sudden change will occurs in human body, theough that makes you v...
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Suggestion: .
...n body, theough that makes you very weak . where as in the case of traditional med...
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Suggestion: Where
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...ody, theough that makes you very weak . where as in the case of traditional medicien the...
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Suggestion: , etc
...ere will be no sideeffects like weakness,etc. In some unique disease like cancer, f...
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Suggestion: .
... of medicen available in traditional way . the neutralize abstract from the nature...
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Suggestion: The
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Suggestion: ,
... from the nature which acts on your body , and ot reacts comfortable . you will no...
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Suggestion: .
...on your body , and ot reacts comfortable . you will not find any othe helth issues...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...your body , and ot reacts comfortable . you will not find any othe helth issues whi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 697.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 140.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97857142857 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64785165912 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.707142857143 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5289733412 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.125 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213790260562 0.216113520407 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0813913162138 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634132736539 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126470530394 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569978357941 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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