People produce more garbage than in the past. Explain how it is affecting us and the measures that could be taken to address the situation.
Garbage is the main reason for getting many new diseases and different infections. Garbage means not only dust but also include usage of plastic. Effects due to garbage and measures need to be taken to reduce the trash is explained in the following paragraph.
On the one hand, as generations changed individuals increased the usage of plastic and it lead to raise of dust. Trash in your surroundings will develop more infections and suffocation .During olden days,people habituated to use of mud plates and glasses. As days passed on they started using steel items. But now, they started using plastic which creates more pollution in environment.For example,the trash includes the plastic covers,rafters etc. which takes much time to dissolve in water.
On the other hand, every individual must think to change their lifestyle.The growth in the trash can be reduced with the change in mindsets of people. Some will be very lazy without any cleanliness. For example, one eat everything and leave the things without throwing covers and dust. Another one is, one don't keep their circumstances hygienic. Here, the authorities also should do their work. Such as, they should check whether street garbage is getting cleaned as per scheduled timings. At the same time, they must investigate whether roads are maintained clean.
After having considered all the above mentioned points, we can draw a final conclusion that we, the individuals are responsible to keep our residence and surrounding's clean and neat. If not, we are only going to get affected because of various infections and spreading of many viral diseases. Keeping our nation healthy is most important.By introducing little changes in our routine,that is usage of things one can reduce the garbage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2296819788 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83024972859 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632508833922 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0070755713 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.2222222222 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7222222222 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101427083505 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0307345774324 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512824651762 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688303319086 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634323842498 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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