Sports events get the nations together and help alleviate the violence in the world.
Worldwide games make the nations together and help to reduce the severity of violence in world. Competition between nations also increase fans and popularity of sports. Further, my views has been briefly explained in the following passage.
Here, Sports between nations increase the relation among two different nations. At the same time, this indulge one to know the backround of a nation regarding a specific game. No doubt, one will be very proud about their nationalism in regard with their achievements. Nation wide games between two different countries also be a platform for authorities to meet and greet one another peacefully. Additionally, This also helps the country fans to move other places to encourage. Indirectly, it helps people to mingle with other country people without any violent attacks. which results in peace of nation.
At the other end, due to tournament among nations the fights in middle of them can also be resolved. Government officials can have their meetings and can also discuss various points regarding their places and developments without any arguments. For example, if there are any political issues between the nations it obviously lead to discussion and fights. Consequently, this will develop the relationship among the countries. While this also develop one to know the cultures of each other.
After having considered all the above mentioned points, we can finally draw a conclusion that sports in between different nations increase nations pride and also reduce the wars among them. Also results in cool meeting without any violence. This makes an individual to feel proud of their nation. Simultaneously, one will get motivated towards sports and encourage them to develop their career related to sports.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, briefly, consequently, finally, if, regarding, so, while, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37184115523 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70506742511 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559566787004 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9728822529 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3157894737 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5789473684 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47368421053 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196915878258 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658690447411 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786693544027 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138918357892 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727552082108 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.27 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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