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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: DEPENDENT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'dependent' on?
Suggestion: dependent
...ployed to dispose the garbage is highly dependant on the Municipality staff and the vehic...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...ted waste spills from the van when they return back after collecting the garbage. So, it ca...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
e.g., however, regarding, so, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 32.9175257732 49% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 778.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98717948718 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6364161916 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.724358974359 0.622605031667 116% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5971543859 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7272727273 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1567400181 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0519426054625 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490826322722 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688231696299 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502416155098 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 7.59969072165 116% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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