My Letter
You are relocating to a new city. write a letter to an agent to arrange a house for you and your family.
When and why are you relocating.
what kind of house do you want?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing with regard to renting a house/apartment in Toronto, Canada. Me and my family is moving to Canada to live there.
Let me explain it further, I have booked seats for us on 23rd of October of PIA from Islamabad airport to Toronto airport. We are going to land there at 3 o' clock pm. To find new prospect of employment and better education of my children, I have decided to get immigration of Canada. Which i have been awarded after fulfilling all basic requirements.
We are family of six persons, me, my wife and four kinds. We need a spacious house as rent would not be a problem for me. As per requirement, it should have garage for 2 cars, three bedrooms and big kitchen.
I am looking forward to your response, if you need any further information feel free to contact me on my mobile (0092-222-22222)
Yours faithfully,
SAIRA
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| 2019-07-15 | Saira Faiz | 75 | view |
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| 2019-07-15 | Saira Faiz | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'garaged'.
Suggestion: garaged
... me. As per requirement, it should have garage for 2 cars, three bedrooms and big kitc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 937.175257732 76% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5935483871 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87901012009 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.729032258065 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.1695771118 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.2 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13900428185 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465428977233 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0393306497738 0.0603063233224 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810316054781 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280293381704 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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