Your car is hired from a company and while you were driving on holiday, you had a small accident. You will have to write a report to the company to explain it.
Write a letter to the company. In your letter, you need to explain the following:
when and where you hired the car
describe how the accident happened
what kind of action did you take after the accident
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have recently rented a car from your Wandsworth showroom in London for a duration of two weeks. Unfortunately, I was involved in a minor accident while driving to Heathrow airport. I am hoping you would go through the report attached to this letter and handle the incident with professionalism as you always do.
With regards to the car that I hired, it is a Honda Civic Hybrid sedan car with the number plate GB LN58RTV. I hired it on 26th May and have paid a week's rent upfront. I would like to commend your company for their professionalism and the service offered as I have always relied on your service whenever I needed to hire a car.
Unfortunately, I had an unavoidable accident involving another party while I was off to the airport to receive my cousin on 02nd June. The accident was caused by the other car failing to stop at the red light at the intersection I was passing through, and as such, the second party collided into the driver's side of my automobile. The driver of the other car agreed to pay £800 as compensation when I informed the police. The police have recorded information regarding the accident and the other driver’s insurance details. The second party's insurance company has been informed as well.
I would like to request that a replacement vehicle should be offered while my current vehicle is incapacitated. Once again, I would like to commend your company's professional attitude.
Yours faithfully,
David Clark
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 423, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ompensation when I informed the police. The police have recorded information regard...
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Line 7, column 530, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... other driver's insurance details. The second partys insurance company has bee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, regarding, second, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1238.0 937.175257732 132% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85490196078 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90125587623 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580392156863 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 389.7 290.88556701 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.2580851693 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.4285714286 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.228865281153 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070448278286 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564240842181 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131924840161 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0771141626123 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.