Neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.

Essay topics:

Neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat.

Dear Ravi,

Hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter in response to your complaint letter you sent me yesterday about the noise from my flat. I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused to you and would like to explain myself, humbly ask for you forgiveness.

This is mainly because of our upcoming wedding anniversary preparations so we had decided to hire a firm to renovate our house in the short period. Hence, they had to bring heavy machinery to complete. This could be the reason you might have heard abnormal noise from our flat. We were unaware of the fact that the sound would reach your house. I already instructed them to reduce the noise level so it should calm down now. I hope this measure would appease you. By the way, the work would be complete by tomorrow.

Once again, I am extremely sorry for any annoyance caused by my action. I hope you would accept my apology. Thanks for
your patience on this matter. Please come by tomorrow evening so that I take you around my freshly revamped flat.

Yours lovingly, Spoorthi

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Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 628, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nt should already be relatively silent. I hope this measure would appease you. By...
^
Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eshly revamped flat. Yours sincerely, Spoorthi
^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, really, so, by the way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71111111111 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40821638829 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608888888889 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7261056846 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3529411765 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2352941176 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.70588235294 4.34317383033 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259383397787 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778011480086 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072209068378 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129957164217 0.12726935374 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0901063579055 0.0580467560999 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.15 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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