Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat

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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat

Dear Mr. and Mrs. Ravi,

Hope you are doing great. I am writing this letter in response to your complaint letter you sent me yesterday about the noise from my flat. I sincerely apologize for the inconvenience caused to you and would like to explain myself, humbly ask for you forgiveness.

On our upcoming wedding anniversary celebrations, we had decided to renovate our house hence we had hired a firm last week for this purpose. Since they had very little time to complete, they finish the work faster they had to bring heavy machinery. This could be the reason you might have heard abnormal noise from our flat. To be honest, I was unaware that the sound would reach your house. I really regret the incident and I owe you any apology. I have already instructed the personnel to tone down the noise level because of which your apartment should already be relatively silent. I hope this measure would appease you. By the way, the work would be complete by tomorrow.

Once again, I am extremely sorry for any annoyance caused by my action. I hope you would accept my apology. Thanks for your patience on this matter. Please come by tomorrow evening so that I take you around my freshly revamped flat.

Yours sincerely,
Spoorthi

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 198, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ze for the inconvenience caused to you. I would like to explain myself. We are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, well, by the way

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79289940828 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48353000611 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674556213018 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3164165743 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.8571428571 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0714285714 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.21428571429 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267745761513 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0785850140599 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742150648531 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123106985163 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.094712138473 0.0580467560999 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.61 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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