Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is often argued that across the globe, humans actions have harmful effect on plants and animals. Whereas some individual believe that this cannot be changed; however, rest opine that. This essay will discuss both the views and suggest how detrimental actions can be stopped against plants and animals.
On one hand, few individual believe that human are the main reason because of whom, several species are being endangered. There are different reasons that make them believe this. Firstly, deforestation playing a vital role because of which plants and animals are losing their natural habitat. Men cutting off tress for the construction of houses on hilltops. For instance, a UK company report stated that in year 2013, 12% of total tress were cutoff on Himalaya just to satisfy human need. Secondly, human are also inclined to use such products, which are made of animal skin like, leather bag and jackets. Therefore, it would not be wrong to say that human activities is one of the prime reasons behind plant and animal extinction.
On the other hand, masses think that several changes can be consider to preserve plants and animals. There are different reasons that make them believe this. To begin with, Government should make some strict laws where slaughterhouses should be closed permanently. Following this approach will surely save several animals, which are being killed daily to feed raising amount of mouths. To cite an example, a survey done by an Italian company shows that when Germany banned slaughterhouse in some of their city, they observed that animal killing was reduced from 15% to 4%. Moreover, Administration from different companies should meet up and make plans to save the environment and it will be possible unless people participate in activities to make a positive change. Thus, masses claim that certain changes can certainly help to save our environment and animals.
To Conclude, This essay has discussed how environment and animal’s growth are impacted due to human actions; however, certain rules and initiatives can help us to save them. If Government and different administrative authorities can start campaign, which will help people to make them aware about the importance of Animals and environment, then such campaign will surely give the positive outcome.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... how environment and animal’s growth are impacted due to human actions; however, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2371967655 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62603144508 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6100991013 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.263157895 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5263157895 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.63157894737 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317259399407 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0942483698616 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649731405203 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189648049344 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558893165953 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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