An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the
airport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time.
Write to your friend. In your letter
Explain the situation
Offer to make alternate arrangements
Dear Amanda,
How are you doing?Thank you for having me over for Christmas last year. I must say, I really had a nice time and the memories of our various adventures will linger in my heart for a long a while.
I was glad when I received your letter about your proposed visit to Nigeria next month. It is nice knowing you have finally accepted to visit me for the Easter celebration. We would be able to visit several monumental places in my country during your one week stay. The places to visit include: The Bar Beach, Eyo Museum, Obudu Cattle Ranch and so on.
My office would be having her yearly strategic retreat and I would be the anchor at the event. Unfortunately, it concides with the same date you will be arriving in the country. So I will be making alternative arrangement for your pick up at the airport. In my absence, my husband would be waiting to receive you at the airport immediately your plane touch down. You would be staying at our home, so that we can spend more time catching up on recent happening in our lives.
I hope you do understand, looking forward to see you soon.
Best Regards,
Amalia Johnson.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Amanda, How are you doing?Thank you for having m...
^^^
Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Thank
Dear Amanda, How are you doing?Thank you for having me over for Christmas la...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou have finally accepted to visit me for the Easter celebration. We would be able...
^^
Line 6, column 257, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...gement for your pick up at the airport. In my absence, my husband would be waiti...
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Line 8, column 43, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...hope you do understand, looking forward to see you soon. Best Regards, Amalia ...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rward to see you soon. Best Regards, Amalia Johnson.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, look, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53623188406 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47961183996 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628019323671 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 21.8350459301 44.8134815571 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.2307692308 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9230769231 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.46153846154 4.34317383033 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290035006437 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102261153537 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718562217172 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157800902934 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0690303330419 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.