An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the
airport, but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time.
Write to your friend. In your letter
Explain the situation
Offer to make alternate arrangements
Dear Amanda,
how are you doing? Thank you for having me over for Christmas last year. I must say, I really had a nice time and the memories of our various adventures will linger in my heart for a long a while.
I am glad when I received your letter about your proposed visit to Nigeria next month. It is refreshing knowing you have finally accepted to come down for Easter celebration. this would avail us the opportunity of visiting different monumental places in my country such as The Bar Beach, Eyo Museum, Obudu Cattle Ranch and so on.
Unfortunately, the yearly departmental retreat in my organization is scheduled to be held the same date of your arrival, and attendance was made compulsory for all staff.
As you can see, I would be unable to pick you up at the airport due to this work related restraint. However, my husband would be coming to receive you at the airport as soon as your plane touch down.
I hope you do understand, looking forward to see you soon.
Best Regards,
Amailia Johnson.
- You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him in hospital, telling him about the match.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter 73
- you have been studying French for one semester at university but have decided to change your language course to English Write a letter to the Dean of studies Professor Andrews explain why you wish to change your course of studies ask if it is possible to 82
- In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping center or mall to do their shopping.Is this a positive or a negative development? 67
- Some people think that coins and paper money will vanish in a few years We will only use plastic cards or some other form of electronic currency Is this a positive or negative development 89
- Television dominates the free-time for too many people. It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others. Do you agree or disagree?Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Wri 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Amanda, how are you doing? Thank you for having ...
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Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ed to come down for Easter celebration. this would avail us the opportunity of visi...
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Line 5, column 214, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... this would avail us the opportunity of visiting different monumental places in ...
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Line 7, column 90, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... my organization is scheduled to be held the same date of your arrival, and atten...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ance was made compulsory for all staff. As you can see, I would be unable to pic...
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Line 9, column 201, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rport as soon as your plane touch down. I hope you do understand, looking forwar...
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Line 11, column 43, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...hope you do understand, looking forward to see you soon. Best Regards, Amailia...
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Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rward to see you soon. Best Regards, Amailia Johnson.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, really, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68508287293 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62697741667 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707182320442 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2822754936 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0909090909 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4545454545 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262304559788 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924280637884 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697035115557 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134248002136 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586605227143 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.