One of your friends recently had a birthday celebration, but you missed it and you forget to tell your friend that you couldn't attend. Write a letter
-explain why you missed it
-explain why you didn't tell your friend
-and say what you would like to do to show that you are sorry.
Dear John,
I'm writing to apologise because I couldn't appear at your birthday party last Sunday.
I was about to leave on that day, but I got an urgent call from my office due to a technical issue related to my job. Even though I was thinking to celebrate this event at the venue, official responsibility ended my all plans in smoke.
While I was trying to figure out the fault at my office, my mobile slipped off from my hand by mistake, and it immediately broke down. As you know, I got a bad memory to remember that contact numbers, I couldn't make any call to you.
The gift I bought on that day for you, I've sent it along with this letter. On top of that, I've purchased two tickets of the newly released movie 'Good News' to show you how thankful I am for our friendship. However, I'm ready to do whatever you want me to do for forgiving me for my blunder mistake.
I hope you will understand my situation and forgive me.
With love,
Dheeraj
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear John, Im writing to apologise because I couldnt ...
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Suggestion: couldn't
... Im writing to apologise because I couldnt appear at your birthday party last Sund...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...ory to remember that contact numbers, I couldnt make any call to you. The gift I b...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
... The gift I bought on that day for you, Ive sent it along with this letter. On top ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...along with this letter. On top of that, Ive purchased two tickets of the newly rele...
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Suggestion: I'm
...nkful I am for our friendship. However, Im ready to do whatever you want me to do ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, while, you know, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42222222222 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40762036095 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683333333333 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.6606595301 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164049925483 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070351089464 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0666517432091 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947513531078 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0510651077772 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.06 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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