Write a complain letter about a taxi service that you have used recently. Please say -when did you use the service? -what was wrong with the service provided -what actions for the improvement do you suggest?

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Write a complain letter about a taxi service that you have used recently. Please say

-when did you use the service?

-what was wrong with the service provided

-what actions for the improvement do you suggest?

Dear sir or madam,

I am writing to complain about a bad taxi service.

Yesterday night, I booked one of your Swift Dzire cars through my mobile application, when I had been waiting at the intersection of Hill Road. It was driven by Mr Smith and having a vehicle no. PB 03 1234.

Although I book this cab in solo riding mode, in between my way to the destination, another passenger was allowed by the driver to sit in. Despite my arguments, he did not give me any satisfactory answer. Besides that, while I was in haste to arrive at the airport, I was bound to wait for 15 minutes, because the cab was parked by driver unnecessarily as he went for smoking a cigarette.

Even though I have already rated only one-star to your service in the Customer Feedback Form, it seems reasonable to complain in written to avoid such negligence. Due to harassment experienced by me, please warn the driver to never make such ridiculous mistakes again and refund the amount of taxi bill, which was $50, in my bank account, written on the cheque that I handed over to your driver. I am looking forward to hearing from you.

Yours faithfully,

Dheeraj Goyal

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir or madam, I am writing to complain about a bad tax...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: YESTERDAY_NIGHT[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'last night' is used.
Suggestion: Last night
...complain about a bad taxi service. Yesterday night, I booked one of your Swift Dzire cars ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 21, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Dheeraj Goyal
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, look, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66504854369 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64895578037 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.699029126214 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0513904012 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3636363636 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151861331431 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0488268388077 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383198386456 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921211502801 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389273770403 0.0580467560999 67% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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