ou are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.
Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter
explain why you are writing
describe what went wrong with the meal and service
suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant
Dear Mr. Watson,
This letter regards my displeasure towards the recent meal last Thursday, I had with my team at your restaurant. It was a sheer disappointment.
To begin with, I am your regular customer for the last 5 years and usually, that is always a pleasant experienece but this time I was severely annoyed as the services provided were unexpectedly low level.
Initially, we had to wait for minimum 35 minutes to get our orders taken as no waiter was free. And then to our dismay, after a long wait for another 40 min, it was simply not our order when our food arrived.
It was a tasteless experience literally as by the end we were left starving and bitter.
Though I understand that lunch is a busy hour, nevertheless I would sincerly advise you to increase your staff, especially in peak hours so that you do not end up losing your potential customers in future and serve the best way you used to previously.
Looking forward to the above changes in the near future.
Yours sincerely,
Jack Nicolson
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, may, nevertheless, so, then, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7039694187 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.694444444444 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 256.5 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1093749788 44.8134815571 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157891173788 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0537241567429 0.0766984524023 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418921848016 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644169430997 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552215082061 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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