Dear Sir,
My name is Madison- Vice-President of Olympic Athlete Association. Our relation with your restaurant goes longback and we visit, for all most all parties, very often. As usually, to celebrate one of our athlete victory, we planned get together at your 'Palm Leaf restaurant' - Beach road outlet on 13th March. However, the reason I am writing this letter is to express negative feedback I received from our members and discuss possible action plan for our future relations.
Coming to specifications, despite of 2 days earlier booking for 15 people, seating was provided for 13 only. Further, your floor manager made our guests to wait nearly half-an-hour just to give space for sitting. Meals , to ruin our experience even more, was not upto the mark. Infact, we never had such stale and tasteless food in your restaurant. Not only, meals served was cold but prepared without adherence to any of our requests. Despite of prior note of allergic items by our secretary, waiter served peanut chutney to our already allergic sportsman and as a consequence he rushed to hospital for severe reaction spurged immediately.
As chief spokesperson of our organisation, it's my duty to ask you to give an apology letter along by side considering paying hospital bills. If not, our committee has rights to proceed legally which we do not wish. Perhaps, we can negotiate for different resolution, provided that you promise to rectify and show more decorum in our next visit. Assuming that you agree to the said conditions, we are planning mega event and would like to discuss about availability of catering services.
Hope my letter did not disappoint your spirit as our intentions were only honest.
Yours sincerely,
Madison.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 937.175257732 155% => OK
No of words: 284.0 206.0 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12676056338 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77475256503 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 127.690721649 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.707746478873 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 290.88556701 154% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.6343006715 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180530574448 0.216113520407 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0562729286558 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319583381937 0.0603063233224 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102253370983 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279981190054 0.0580467560999 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 41.2886597938 216% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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