ou have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
. thank your friend for the holiday.
. explain that you left your wallet in their house.
. give them instructions of how to send it back to you.
Dear Katty,
How are you? I hope you are doing fine. I just got home safe and sound. I would like to express how thankful I am on spending a whole week with you and your family. It was such a delightful experience and it definitely rejuvenate my mind.
Since I really had a great time, i forgot my wallet in your house. I thought that I misplaced it somewhere as I cannot find it in my luggage. The last thing I remember was I put it on top of the drawer near your bedroom, I hope its still there. It contains some identification cards like my driver's license and company health card. They are not confidential but it's important. I do not worry at all because I know it is in good hands.
Whenever you have time, kindly send it through courier please. Enclose with this letter is my company address, I prefer to use my office address as I spend most of my time here.
I am looking forward to spend more holidays with you and I hope you can come to my hometown and I will be your host next time around.
I can't wait to see you again my friend.
Best regards,
Joan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 115, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...n my holiday out of your busy schedule. we had so much fun after so long and it is...
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Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...there in your black leather jacket that i wore while going to park street. I kept...
^
Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...hink you have my office address so here i am sharing the same. Oriflame India Pv...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 717.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 161.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45341614907 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41022601851 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689440993789 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1432696074 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.1538461538 76.5299724578 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.3846153846 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199619709222 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052884611978 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556058099349 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975191430509 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.060105281103 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.64 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.