Your friends son is going to your country for his holiday, she want him to stay in your home. But you can't accommodate him, write a letter for your friend.
In the letter, you should
. apology to your friend
. explain why she cant stay in your home
. give her suggestion for her son arrangement during his holiday
Dear Rini,
Glad to hear from you after so long. How are you doing these days? I have received your letter yesterday evening but I am afraid I could not attend him during his stay here in India.
Had I been in India during his stay, he could have stayed at my place but unfortunately I am travelling to Canada with my family for a month to attend my sister's wedding ceremony.
However, I could arrange his stay as I have plethora of good friends and relatives in my country. In fact I have already spoke to one of my relative "Dev" as you also know him well. Moreover, his daughter can make a good friend with your son too, since they are of same age.
Once you confirmed, I will share all his contact no and address details as soon as possible. Looking forward to hearing from you. Till then take care.
With Regards,
Simi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 50, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...confirmed, I will share all his contact no and address details as soon as possible...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, look, moreover, so, then, well, in fact, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 695.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45512820513 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39872959747 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.679487179487 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9275862058 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.1818181818 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1818181818 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.54545454545 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240935512088 0.216113520407 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765276231436 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710220274689 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135914314437 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730551185823 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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