ou were sent by your company to attend a meeting in another country, but you are not happy with the hotel your organizer booked for you. Write a letter to an organizer about the
meeting details
What you did not like about the hotel
what you want organizer to do
Dear Sir,
My name Rachel, a senior physiotherapist in your company. I am writing this letter to express my disappointment with the accommodation provided by the organization in an oversea meeting.
I had an oversea meeting in Singapore regarding advances in electrotherapy instruments for pain management from 15th to 20th of December. The meeting was basically about new technologies like laser and three-dimensional traction for the treatment of pain. I had left Rajiv Gandhi Airport on the 14th evening and have arrived at hotel Silver Star on the 15th morning. First of all, the hotel was not up to the standard level, and the facilities were poor. In addition to it, the hotel was located on the outskirts because of which daily traveling to the meeting venue; Paradise Biomedicals was time-consuming. As a result, I was not able to reach the venue on time on the first day. Moreover, while returning, finding a cab was very difficult, and most drivers did not prefer to go so far.
I would like to recommend you to provide a premium hotel for the employees. Our company usually deals with the instruments provided with the Paradise Biomedicals, so it would be apt to provide accommodation near it. Kindly ensure that the hotel bookings in another country are made with proper research so that the employees, who travel abroad, are not inconvenienced.
Yours faithfully,
Richa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 268, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on for the treatment of pain. I had left Rajiv Gandhi Airport on the 14th evening...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, regarding, so, while, in addition, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1179.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12608695652 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14504140581 2.54303337028 124% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.2027492499 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6923076923 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6923076923 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234778220016 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703762200033 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531307332073 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131220047579 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0189966046562 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.