Hope this letter finds you and your family in the best of health and sprits. Today, I write this letter inform to you a good news. Do you remember about the INTERNATIONAL EXHIBITION OF PHOTOGRAPHY that I told you last month. This is a photography competition that subject protects enviroment. I really like this content which this contest wants to comunication to people. I think it is very important because people save earth that is save our life.They remand participants to send some pictures to attend this competition. So, I have sent to them some pictures which I like the best. As you know, I really love taking pictures. Specially, taking pictures about enviroment.
In this week, people in the organizing committee have sent me a letter to advertise that I had won this competition. That is amazing! I can't believe that I won because it has many participants send to this contest. They have inform the prizes include: ten thousands dollars, a tour to England and more special is my picture is going to present at their exhibition. That's very wonderful.
The exhibition will be hold on 7:00 A.M -10:00 P.M September 12th, 2021. I would like to invite you to come this event. If you could attend I am really happy.
Looking forward for your to come that day!
Sincerely,
Gao
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- Write a letter to your friend telling him her that you have won a photography competition In your letter Describe the event Describe the photograph you have sent for the competition Invite him her to the exhibition where your photograph is presented 77
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'good news'.
Suggestion: good news
...oday, I write this letter inform to you a good news. Do you remember about the INTERNATIONA...
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Line 1, column 450, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: They
...people save earth that is save our life.They remand participants to send some pictur...
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Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...on this competition. That is amazing! I cant believe that I won because it has many ...
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Line 2, column 225, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'informed'.
Suggestion: informed
...cipants send to this contest. They have inform the prizes include: ten thousands dolla...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ial is my picture is going to present at their exhibition. Thats very wonderful. ...
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Line 2, column 366, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... going to present at their exhibition. Thats very wonderful. The exhibition will ...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
... The exhibition will be hold on 7:00 A.M -10:00 P.M September 12th, 2021. I woul...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: M
...ition will be hold on 7:00 A.M -10:00 P.M September 12th, 2021. I would like to i...
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Line 4, column 121, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... like to invite you to come this event. If you could attend I am really happy. L...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, i think, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1071.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80269058296 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73152703087 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582959641256 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.919941739 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1176470588 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.29411764706 4.34317383033 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217301523533 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702389477625 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563943427703 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128644315255 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0300850707399 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.67 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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