ou and your friend booked a theater tickets in advance. Apology to your friend as you can't make it to the theater with him.In the letter, you should:apologiesexplain what reasons you can’t make itgive options what can be done with the ticket.

Essay topics:

ou and your friend booked a theater tickets in advance. Apology to your friend as you can't make it to the theater with him.

In the letter, you should:

apologies

explain what reasons you can’t make it

give options what can be done with the ticket.

Dear Rachel

I hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I was very excited about our movie, Dabaang, but I regret to inform you that I will not be able to accompany you.

Actually, on the same day, 13th December, I have got an important conference cum meeting for which I have to travel to Banglore. The conference is organized by my company, on Digit Data Science from 10 am to 6 pm followed by dinner. Since it will be late, I have to stay for the night at Banglore. I am sorry to cancel the plan at the last moment, but believe me this conference was totally unexpected. I was informed by my manager today only and this will be helpful for my career.

Don't worry, I have already spoken to our old friend Pari, she is ready to come. I hope you too won't mind going with her. Once again I am sorry for the inconvenience.

Hope to see you soon

With love,

Richa

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...is will be helpful for my career. Dont worry, I have already spoken to our old...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33720930233 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3690915233 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6177428637 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8181818182 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6363636364 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.18181818182 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120326789227 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500790339401 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054402180644 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0916870510695 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495784121519 0.0580467560999 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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