our neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise
describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Arminder,
I thought you'd like to know that soon I shall be performing live on the sets of "Best of Bands" which will be aired next month. Isn't it amazing? The stress level is immense due to the concept of on spot activity hence my practice schedules have increased.
First of all, I'd like to apologise for the loud music. I understand it must be too disturbing to you and your family since your kids are preparing for their exams. I'm really sorry! Hope you understand that I completely lost track of the surroundings around me. I'm very tensed and dive deep into the music.
Secondly, I shall take immediate action to sound proof my flat to trap the noise acoustically so that it doesn't bother you all. Moreover I shall try to limit the sessions and practice with low volume to avoid any distractions. Thanks for letting me know about the incessant loud music.
See you soon!
Yours friendly
Manjyot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'd
Dear Arminder, I thought youd like to know that soon I shall be perfo...
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Suggestion: Isn't
...s' which will be aired next month. Isnt it amazing? The stress level is immense...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...edules have increased. First of all, Id like to apologise for the loud music. I...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...our kids are preparing for their exams. Im really sorry! Hope you understand that ...
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Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding surroundings'?
Suggestion: the surrounding surroundings
...erstand that I completely lost track of the surroundings around me. Im very tensed and dive deep into the ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...st track of the surroundings around me. Im very tensed and dive deep into the musi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... trap the noise acoustically so that it doesnt bother you all. Moreover I shall try to...
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Line 7, column 129, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...cally so that it doesnt bother you all. Moreover I shall try to limit the sessions and p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, moreover, really, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76543209877 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55829756874 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691358024691 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4775215653 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.1818181818 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7272727273 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 4.34317383033 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199473871491 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669126502849 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735987402713 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101013242757 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582054871082 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.