You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour Write a letter to your neighbour In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to co

Essay topics:

You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.

Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter

introduce yourself

describe your plans for the party

invite your neighbour to come

You do NOT need to write any addresses.

You should write at least 150 words.

Hi Rodger,

Let me introduce myself! I'm Manu, your next door neighbour. My family and I have just moved in last week into this beautiful society and thought of getting to know our fellow people residing near our house. We've arranged a house warming party this weekend for our family, friends and neighbours.

The whole idea of this celebration is to get together and have some fun. Since halloween is around the corner, I've planned a monster theme party which shall begin by 7 pm onwards. However, the concept of costume dress is not compulsory. Also, snacks will be served followed by dinner. Because this is a costume party, there will be loud music as well but we shall kept it audible enough so that the neighbourhood is not disturbed.

Anyways, I would be glad if you and your family could join us in our celebration and have a good-time. It will surely be amazing! Looking forward to meeting you.

Yours friendly
Manu

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...uld join us in our celebration and have a good-time. It will surely be amazing! Looking for...
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...orward to meeting you. Yours friendly Manu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, however, if, look, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 775.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75460122699 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47361780602 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.736196319018 0.622605031667 118% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4686645938 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4545454545 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8181818182 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.18181818182 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209553954282 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736588268915 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074808001388 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11896878418 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568752984877 0.0580467560999 98% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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