Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Many nations shall be dealing with certain issues such as global warming, overpopulation and education. Religious conflict and poverty are the two major problems that we will be facing in the upcoming years since everyone are divided by their cultural traditions and family backgrounds.
First of all, India is know for its varied culture and religions. Even though our country has a strong heritage, its people are separated because of religious differences. This means that people form small groups based on their preferred languague and communicate with each other in their mother tongue. Moreover, these people form a perception about other religions which further gives rise to disagreements and fights. Second of all, our country will also face poverty problems in the next decade. The rich are becoming richer, the poor are getting poorer and the middle class people remain mediocure. It is said that about eight-five per cent of people are slowly degrading into slums every year. Furthermore, Dharavi in Mumbai is known as the largest slum of our country.
However, we can take necessary actions in order to control these problems by simple methods like secularism and income equality. In the former case, religious indiscrimination should be banned. All castes and traditions must be respected which can be done by educating the children about every culture and not just about one religion. In short, intra-state cold wars will be eradicated in future. For the second issue, government should regulalte commercial zone and make sure everyone are given equal salaries irrespective of their hierarchy level. London has no underdeveloped citizens because of they practised this method to solve poverty.
To conclude, in the next decade, our country might come into contact with these hurdles if we do not address these pressing issues. Hence, by aiming towards becoming a secular nation that is united by various religions and by eradicating the class system to remove poverty, we can easily overcome these challenges.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
... backgrounds. First of all, India is know for its varied culture and religions. E...
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Line 5, column 387, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ntra-state cold wars will be eradicated in future. For the second issue, government shoul...
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Line 5, column 589, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_I[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'because they' instead.
Suggestion: because they
.... London has no underdeveloped citizens because of they practised this method to solve poverty....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, in short, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31677018634 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69393424951 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630434782609 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2629287289 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.1111111111 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227613472397 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.063423606334 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663552356681 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132317930534 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026570947426 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.