On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you havetravel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In yourletter:• describe the item you lost• explain how you lost it• tel

Essay topics:

On a recent holiday, you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have
travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.

Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your
letter:

• describe the item you lost
• explain how you lost it
• tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sam,

I really enjoyed my time that I spent with you and your family the past week. Thank you very much for mading the holiday a remarkable one that I'll share my memories with my family for the rest of my life.

Although I've spent a leisure time with you, but unfortauntely I've lost my wallet at your place. I'm sure my wallet should be either on the top of your washing machine where I used to wash my clothes or inside one of the drawers in the bedroom were I slept. My wallet is made of leather and has brown color. Also, it has a horse symbole printed on its back.

If you find my wallet, please send it to my address which I gave it to you before I leave your house or you can send it with our other friend, Tony, who will be visiting you next Monday.

Again, thank you for your help and please pass my regards to your wife and the rest of your family.

Best wishes,

Jack

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Line 5, column 243, Rule ID: WERE_VBB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'where' or 'we'?
Suggestion: where; we
...nside one of the drawers in the bedroom were I slept. My wallet is made of leather a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.16571428571 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.95227967217 2.54303337028 77% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605714285714 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7718207058 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.77777777778 4.34317383033 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189511442794 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766607419598 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747986764651 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130672789711 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0412272855775 0.0580467560999 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.91 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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