On recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
- Describe the item you lost
- Explain how you lost it
- Tell insurance company what you would like them to do
Dear sir,
I am Harry Sandhu, I took the travel insurance from you last week for my international trip from Delhi to New york. I am writing this letter to remark you that accidentally I lost one of my valuable asset during that travel.
I took this tour along with my family. The tour was amazing, we covered all the tourist spots that we planned to visit. But Unfortunately, I lost my Canon DSLR camera that cost me around 12000 Rs. Let me explain you in detail, Actually, we planned to visit Block island, for which we took a ferry from Newyork. The ferry tour was wonderful except that mistakenly we left our camera there itself beneath our seat.
It would be really appreciated, if you could provide me with the maximum refund of my loss as I took the premium insurance with supreme coverage. You could find detailed information through my insurance id, which is HDN01235. For any queries related to this matter, you could contact me at 401-568-3669.
Looking forward for a positive feedback from you regarding this issue.
Yours faithfully
Harry Sandhu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir, I am Harry Sandhu, I took the travel i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f my valuable asset during that travel. I took this tour along with my family. T...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...valuable asset during that travel. I took this tour along with my family. Th...
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Line 5, column 414, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r camera there itself beneath our seat. It would be really appreciated, if you c...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...garding this issue. Yours faithfully Harry Sandhu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, look, really, regarding
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83243243243 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58628172818 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632432432432 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5163170011 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2727272727 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8181818182 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.81818181818 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236641607007 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891439481078 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698195749249 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140916710644 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0689065980049 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.