On recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.Write a letter the manager of your insurance company. In your letter-Describe the item you lost-Explain how you lost it-Tell insurance com

Essay topics:

On recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
- Describe the item you lost
- Explain how you lost it
- Tell insurance company what you would like them to do

Dear Sir,

I am writing to ask about the procedure to claim the insurance amount, Which I have purchased previous year against the I-phone x. Reason being why I lost it during my holiday in goa last week on 22nd of June. This gadget is quite expensive worth 80,000 rupees.

I lost it during my return from goa to Mumbai in rajdhani express. The train was full and there pass no place to sit. I remember when train stopped in station to load more passenger the situation more like stampede. I could not resist the crowd and fell down and lost my phone. All trip was

it would be great if you check the details of policy number PR-125679WE with the name of Praveen and let me know by when I can contact you for further formalities and process. do tell me if anything else is required from my end.

Hope to hear from as soon as possible.

Your Faithfully,

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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... against the I-phone x. Reason being why I lost it during my holiday in goa last ...
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...ell down and lost my phone. All trip was it would be great if you check the detai...
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...wn and lost my phone. All trip was it would be great if you check the details...
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...ou for further formalities and process. do tell me if anything else is required fr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon as possible. Your Faithfully,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 724.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.525 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28801223773 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.7125 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4907761528 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.4 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.6 4.34317383033 14% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176749233074 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053068746595 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432669687788 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0728156773534 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044218463158 0.0580467560999 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.9 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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