On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company in your letter.
Describe the item lost.
Explain how you lost it.
Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
Respected sir,
This is to tell you that I've lost my mobile phone during my visit to isle of man, it is a brand new Samsung galaxy fold. It was in my pocket since five months. However, it looks brand new in condition. It costs nearly 1500 USD (approx). Nevertheless, leather case which is attached to the mobile is equally expensive compared to the mobile. So, it is estimated around 3000 USD.
During my visit to motorcycle race in isle of man, there was a fatal crash between two bikes , were both the bikers lost their control and hit the paddock through which people are scared and running from the place were they were sitting. While running accidentally drop my phone in the crowd and searched, due to biggest crash that took place nobody is there to helmet out in that situation, because of that my phone was lost.
To overcome these kind of bad time I've my travel insurance, although it covers all types of electronic gadgets im pretty afraid for what had happened. I'll attach the copy of invoice of both mobile and leather case. In a special way im requesting your insurance company to cover and pay my loss through travel insurance scheme as soon as possible.
Regards,
Arun
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...pected sir, This is to tell you that Ive lost my mobile phone during my visit to...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...here was a fatal crash between two bikes , were both the bikers lost their contro...
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Line 5, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s a fatal crash between two bikes , were both the bikers lost their control and h...
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Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the biggest'.
Suggestion: to the biggest
...my phone in the crowd and searched, due to biggest crash that took place nobody is there t...
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Line 7, column 13, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... that my phone was lost. To overcome these kind of bad time Ive my travel insurance, al...
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Line 7, column 36, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
.... To overcome these kind of bad time Ive my travel insurance, although it covers...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...im pretty afraid for what had happened. Ill attach the copy of invoice of both mobi...
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Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "In a special way" with adverb for "special"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nvoice of both mobile and leather case. In a special way im requesting your insurance company to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, nevertheless, so, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 984.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64150943396 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33264837246 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632075471698 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.5849027767 44.8134815571 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.4545454545 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2727272727 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27272727273 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137523351153 0.216113520407 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382308702019 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056459979882 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.086918021306 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.027448236828 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.