Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.To what extent do you agree with this view?

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere.
To what extent do you agree with this view?

These days people think that government wastes lot of money in arts instead of spending it on the public services . However developing arts gives equal benefits for people during their leisure time.

Investing in public service is obviously gives real advantages for the people. For instance spending money for hospitals makes people healthier and live happily and developing education institution also plays a major role in students life which makes their future brighter. Building proper roads helps the government to get more investment from the foreign countries and make a effort less travel for the public. Since investing in public service really helps the people but developing arts is as important compared to the public welfare which makes people to enjoy their free time in a joyful way.

Certainly , people relax themselves by going to theatres or listing to a music which relaxes them from tension and all other mental pressure. Paintings, has become a great trend during these days people often like to watching beautiful art works for the purpose of relaxation after have a hard week in their offices. Although, government have separate department for arts it is not properly maintained in the developing countries. Most of these sectors have been maintained by private organization.

To end up, government should equally spend money on arts compared to other divisions. Allocating sum to arts is definitely going to benefit people in many ways. In my opinion both public service and arts are important to country for the betterment of the people .

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, for instance, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23015873016 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61311276521 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2435877981 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.384615385 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15266317725 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667855862422 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06035484853 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123113183892 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06276773909 0.056905535591 110% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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