On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost.
Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter
- Describe the item you lost
- Explain how you lost it
- Tell the insurance company what you would like them to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing this letter to claim a lost according to the travel insurance I signed with your company. As specified in condition of insurance contract, this is your responsibility to pay for any lost I had when travelling to Hanoi.
The item I would like to claim is my smart phone which is the most expensive model of the branch Mobiano with golden cover and diamond attached. I bought it last year with 10.000 dollars.
I may lost it when I visited the pedestrian street last nigh, at the main entrain of a traditional restaurant. I had some business there and when I went out, an old man and a boy was coming, asking me to buy some souvenirs. I guess that when I was choosing the gift for my friend, the boy took my phone.
As stated in insurance contract, I must notice you about my lost as soon as possible. Should there are something else I have to do, please let me know.
I’m looking for your reply soon.
Yours faithfully,
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...in entrain of a traditional restaurant. I had some business there and when I went...
^
Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oming, asking me to buy some souvenirs. I guess that when I was choosing the gift...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so, i guess
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50847457627 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56256887374 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.632768361582 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.9646538046 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.8 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 4.34317383033 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249989287902 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086587344936 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870430629021 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119595226088 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0983060546344 0.0580467560999 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.