Nowadays, there are a controversial debate between people who support fixed punishments and who claims to flexible punishments. In my opinion, deciding one's punishment should depend on their situation and how significant the crime is.
The statement of fixed punishments had existed longtime ago. First, opponents of fixed punishments maintain that this method can help to reduce the difficulties when constructing and implementing laws. In fact, fixed punishments mean that there are not the need to build specific articles for each case of circumstances. As a result, we can save time and money for the law procedures. Secondly, instead of analyzing too much on situation where people do crime, we should educate the people how to follow the regulation of law. Japan, for example, is where people follow strictment law's regulation and government spend a great deal of budget to educate people. Consequently, since people's behavior is very good, the government do not to have complex punishments.
On the other hand, because the situation of each person when they do the crime are different between peoples, it is necessary to carefully analyse before decide any punishment. For example, in some situation a good person could hurt another to protect his interest or someone else, however in the view of law, this is a crime. In this case, it is totally different which an action of a person attracting people because of his bad attitude. Furthermore, the purpose of law is to educate people. Hence, strictment punishments should applied for crucial crime, whereas easy punishments should applied for other cases.
In conclusion, while fixed punishments could be applied in some cases, I am inclined to believe that flexible punishments should be taken into consideration depend on the situation. Governments need to study carefully following country's condition.
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Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34576271186 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96678926655 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562711864407 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2091284905 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5625 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8125 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334111521305 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096271439675 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763682731487 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200641654156 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310008050756 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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