On a recent holiday you lost a valuable item. Fortunately, you have travel insurance to cover the cost of anything lost. Write a letter to the manager of insurance company. In your letter
• Describe the item you lost.
• Explain how you lost it.
• Tell the insurance comp
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I have recently lost my laptop, while I was travelling to France for meeting.
The laptop is a Sony Vaio and cost $900 and I bought it last month. It has a resolution of 20 megapixel, a camera lens 67 millimeter , white in colour and square in shape. It was inside the black laptop case with my on it. On the top of the handle there was Yellow Symentic logo of my company.
I lost it when I was attending meeting with the CEO in the Grand Mark Hotel. I had given presentation regarding software application , which my company implemented in their organization. After having lunch with them , I forgot to take my laptop with me and I left it in the conference room.
I am entitled to make claim for the value of the above mentioned item and request that you send me the details on what I need to do in order to proceed.
I look forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Sadaf Alam
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'millimeter' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'millimeters'.
Suggestion: millimeters
...ution of 20 megapixel, a camera lens 67 millimeter , white in colour and square in shape. ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...0 megapixel, a camera lens 67 millimeter , white in colour and square in shape. It...
^^
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: white
...egapixel, a camera lens 67 millimeter , white in colour and square in shape. It was inside the ...
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Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: square
...ens 67 millimeter , white in colour and square in shape. It was inside the black laptop case wi...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...sentation regarding software application , which my company implemented in their o...
^^
Line 7, column 216, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ganization. After having lunch with them , I forgot to take my laptop with me and ...
^^
Line 7, column 292, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e and I left it in the conference room. I am entitled to make claim for the valu...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 811.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.45604395604 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62730506815 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648351648352 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6175738962 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7272727273 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205775779227 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636528626398 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757602626402 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120263239305 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937594238349 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.