A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.
- Describe your point of view
- Say what you like about the show and why.
- Ask the newspaper to take some action.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Harry Martin, grade 12th student of st. johns public school. Recently, I got to know about your complain for Comedy TV show, the laughter challenge. This letter is in regards to that.
As you hold a responsible position in our society and I understand your concern about the content of show. However, I believe that reality shows are not based on script and if any contestant behaved rudely or presents poor or adult content this does not mean that the whole show is corrupted.
This is the fourth season of this show and this show has produced many stars and has the power to transform a common man to a celebrity. The laughter challenge show is the only show that a person could enjoy with family and forget about his worries and tension.
On behalf of all other supporters and fans of this show, I request you to revoke your complaint as this may hamper and seize the opportunities from thousands of rising stars. And also, there are so many people involved with one show including camera man, dressers , producers, anchors and so on, do you think that they all should be punished for one person's mistake.
I hope you understand my point of view and reconsider your decision about complaining.
Yours Faithfully,
Harry Martin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am Harry Martin, grade 12th student of...
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... mean that the whole show is corrupted. This is the fourth season of this show a...
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...d forget about his worries and tension. On behalf of all other supporters and fa...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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... one show including camera man, dressers , producers, anchors and so on, do you th...
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...about complaining. Yours Faithfully, Harry Martin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 221.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75113122172 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47529797662 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642533936652 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.4346851263 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4166666667 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204775773691 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788256684587 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687727680845 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128137131908 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499930009577 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.