You have recently moved into a company accommodation and you are facing some issues at the place. Write a letter to your HR department. In the letter, mention: • A brief description of your accommodation. • What problems are you facing? • What do you expect the company to do about it?
Dear sir or madam,
I am Harry Martin, senior marketing officer, recently posted in Boston branch. I am thankful to you for providing accommodation facility for me and my family. But, Unfortunately, I am facing few issues in my apartment that I want to discuss with you through this letter.
I am alloted a 1 BHK room in villa del Rio apartments, which is well-equiped with all the basic facilities like stove, oven, refrigerator and so on. The first problem that I have is my apartment is at third floor, which makes it really difficult for my wife with two toddlers to go up and down. Moreover, the neighbor that lives just below our apartment always complains for my kids noise which I could not handle anymore. Another major issue is that , the room heaters is not working, which makes it worse in this extreme weather.
I hope you consider my problems seriously and I request you to allot me a new apartment or switch my apartment with any other employee's room. It would be better if I could get a room on ground floor and also where the heater and other basic facilities are well-working.
I hope to get a positive revert from you soon, about this matter.
Your Sincerely,
Harry Martin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear sir or madam, I am Harry Martin, senior marketing offi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o discuss with you through this letter. I am alloted a 1 BHK room in villa del R...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...dle anymore. Another major issue is that , the room heaters is not working, which ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther basic facilities are well-working. I hope to get a positive revert from you...
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Line 10, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon, about this matter. Your Sincerely, Harry Martin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, really, so, third, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 995.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67136150235 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67999922433 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633802816901 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1732430235 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.4545454545 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144433660184 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588819374125 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562274556672 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904506217969 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493724823282 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.