A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.
Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:
explain what you are currently doing
describe your suitability for this area of work
say when you can attend an interview
Dear Sir or Madam,
This is in response to your advertisement about your need for a waiter to work in your renown restaurant.
I passed out Bachelors in Culinary arts in the year 2008. Since then, I am working as a floor waiter in the Hilton hotel located near Heathrow airport. My job roles: cleaning cutlery, waiting at the table to welcome guests, serving breakfast or main courses of the day to the guests, settling bills, dressing the tables once they leave and finally, taking telephone and online orders.
I am confident that I can easily fit into your organisation as I already have hands on experience in this area. My strengths: maintain positive attitude with customers and colleagues, fluent in 3 languages namely English, French and Spanish and I am scrupulous, meaning, I can honestly account for all monetary transactions. Finally, from the above one can understand that I am good at multi-tasking.
I am currently serving last week of my notice period and will be available for an interview by the next week.
Sincerely,
Jack Dan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, honestly, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 899.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05056179775 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85108346681 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702247191011 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.1781855943 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8888888889 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55555555556 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209691047356 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.073759705061 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109934102372 0.0603063233224 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154267791313 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147715854269 0.0580467560999 254% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 8.37731958763 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.