üriting motivation letter for scholarship application
It is irrefutable that Cultural Sociology and Mass Media are closely interconnected. In a modern-day world Mass Media has an immense impact on cultural emergence, development and transformation. The process is highly accelerated owing to free and instant access to worldwide sources from all points in the world. Such influence inevitably affects our cultural distinction and diversity.
Such tendency has long attracted my attention and currently composes the key part of my bachelor’s degree research. The research is intended to define the homogenization and americanization of contemporary culture owing to mass media and indicate its undesirable impact and possible solutions. It is hypothesized that this tendency can pave the way for the dominance of American culture over local cultures in global civilization, which, in turn, can lead to the destruction of the cultural identity around. The loss of cultural identity, accordingly, leads to a regression of the global civilization, to which all local cultures belong, because different cultures bring new ways of thinking, new knowledge and different experiences, making this global civilization more dynamic and progressive. Undoubtedly, the subject is generic and demands a detailed research during the master’s degree.
As of particular objectives, I am keen on, apart from yielding the knowledge provided by the curriculum, conducting individual and team research projects pertaining to my topic. I am planning to actively participate in corresponding events and seminars related to my research area. Moreover, I am looking forward to drawing parallels between Azerbaijan and the Czech Republic, in terms of the impacts of Mass Media on the culture. An intriguing comparison will include the degree of influence and prospective solutions.
It is my firm belief that with the expertise gained at current university, practical knowledge and due motivation, I will achieve all of the set goals.
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- Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 844, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'detailed research'.
Suggestion: detailed research
...dly, the subject is generic and demands a detailed research during the master’s degree. As of part...
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Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...edge and due motivation, I will achieve all of the set goals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, if, look, moreover, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 5.05154639175 317% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 3.85567010309 389% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 937.175257732 178% => OK
No of words: 296.0 206.0 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64527027027 4.54256449028 124% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29247369542 2.54303337028 129% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 127.690721649 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591216216216 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.0 290.88556701 183% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9468513401 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.357142857 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.35714285714 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0103978227752 0.216113520407 5% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00279003552427 0.0766984524023 4% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0100596161431 0.0603063233224 17% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00413049407128 0.12726935374 3% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00715422559182 0.0580467560999 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 8.37731958763 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 70.7449484536 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 7.45979381443 185% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.49 8.71597938144 178% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 7.59969072165 133% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 41.2886597938 247% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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