application for university scholarship

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application for university scholarship

Dear Selection Committee
At the request of Sevda Babayeva, it is such an immense pleasure that I offer this letter of recommendation in support of her application for admission to scholarship program at your esteemed University.I have known Ms.Sevda Babayeva for more than four years as a student at the Baku State University. She has taken the following courses which I taught:
● Introduction to Linguistics
● Linguistic Typology
As a teacher, this time period gave me more opportunities to determine the Sevda’s knowledge of subject matter and to observe her study skills, analytical abilities and punctuality. Within this period, I was fascinated with her study performance and results of her readiness to all seminars and perfect preparation for research thesis. In every lecture, she came to lesson with crucial and debatable questions related to lecture topics, and was very keen interest to solve them and to find innovative approaches. She did various analyses of languages and precisely applied all tasks related to subject. As a result of all her efforts, she has managed to gain a score of 92 from 100 in Linguistic Typology in examination. Frankly writing, all her active attendance in my lesson, comprehensive knowledge in different areas and discipline have given me a right to express my support and pleasure about her in order to be admitted by your University. I am definitely sure that she also will be successful at her next education step, after returning to Azerbaijan she will sign precious work in her study sphere and work career.
In other words, she is very dynamic, determined and ambitious student in terms of gaining achievements in her studies.Her information assimilating ability is quite high, therefore she is able to grasp complete course of any studies related to her major. Her main target is to be a highly competitive and qualified student and to continue her education and to gain lots of success in this way. In addition she has qualitative traits; she is a trusting, considerate and kind person. Therefore she is able to create friendly environment in any situation.
Additional to her noticeable activities in my lesson, I know that she is very talented student in doing research about language issues and has qualitative academic writing skills. Her academic approaches, patience and ability prove that she will obtain considerable achievements in her prospective academical path, and contribute her home country.
It is also worth to mention that Sevda has been a part of four international researcher conferences where he represented our university.This made her a more with high analytical ability person who can expresses her new ideas easily.
I can wholeheartedly recommend Sevda to you with full confidence. All my experience with her gives me full right to say that she is a true person that you can invest her education without any hesitation. I have no doubt she will achieve all her aims in this sphere, and obtain new skills, knowledges. I think she is a quite suitable candidate for your master program. If you need any other information about this promising student, please contact me.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hip program at your esteemed University.I have known Ms.Sevda Babayeva for more t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, frankly, if, so, therefore, i think, in addition, no doubt, as a result, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.48453608247 227% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 5.05154639175 396% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 81.0 32.9175257732 246% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 26.3917525773 269% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 21.0 3.85567010309 545% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2651.0 937.175257732 283% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 514.0 206.0 250% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15758754864 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 3.78020617076 126% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03602260684 2.54303337028 119% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 127.690721649 216% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.536964980545 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 854.1 290.88556701 294% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.13402061856 219% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.8031737625 44.8134815571 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.55 76.5299724578 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 16.8248392259 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.29896907216 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 2.54639175258 628% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 7.41237113402 229% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0495472292339 0.216113520407 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0164638809293 0.0766984524023 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436013468467 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0240288870537 0.12726935374 19% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531471439031 0.0580467560999 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 8.37731958763 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 70.7449484536 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 7.45979381443 190% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 147.0 41.2886597938 356% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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