The road in front of your house got damaged a long ago and nothing has been done about it. Write a letter to the municipal authority complaining about the damaged road.
In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• explain the condition of the road
• and suggest what they should do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction on the negligence in the task of repairing the road by the municipal authority workers and thus would like to complaint about the same.
My name is Prabhpreet Kaur working as a Senior Manager in HSBC Bank and a resident of New Friends Colony residing in House Number 27 for the past 13 years.
Last month, due to heavy rains the road in the front of my house was damaged. There is a big pothole in the middle of the road. During rains the pothole is filled with water making it difficult for driving cars. Moreover, many children have got hurt while riding bicycle and also water logging becomes the home of mosquitoes and other insects thus causing many diseases
I would suggest you to take necessary and immediate actions and send a team of efficient workers for repairing the damaged road as soon as possible so that not only there are no casualties but also people do not suffer from any health issues.
I hope you will take prompt action
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 370, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...other insects thus causing many diseases I would suggest you to take necessary an...
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Line 11, column 35, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s. I hope you will take prompt action Looking forward to hearing from you soon...
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Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Yours faithfully, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77202072539 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43280664027 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673575129534 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.934191532 44.8134815571 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 115.125 76.5299724578 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.75 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187767398833 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.078511975307 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672443676702 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675088670415 0.12726935374 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0744601805818 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.